tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post109076900771653717..comments2024-01-09T05:39:44.523-08:00Comments on I Hate Poetry: The Buddah Moskowitz Archive: TranslationBuddah Moskowitzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-69317457947736261502016-12-19T17:38:04.512-08:002016-12-19T17:38:04.512-08:00^ That was me too. ;)
Dude. This is AWESOME!!! I ...^ That was me too. ;)<br /><br />Dude. This is AWESOME!!! I especially like the first and third stanzas.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-40498319438215461132015-05-23T18:10:22.222-07:002015-05-23T18:10:22.222-07:00This is really creative and would be perfect for t...This is really creative and would be perfect for the prompt over at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads this week: http://withrealtoads.blogspot.ca/2015/05/fireblossom-friday-recipe-forpoetry.html<br /><br />We share a few on this list, too!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-44646163145160762222015-05-22T21:48:47.559-07:002015-05-22T21:48:47.559-07:00Ah.. yes.. a life experienced in breadth
of dark ...Ah.. yes.. a life experienced in breadth <br />of dark and light.. is a light well<br />mixed.. as worth living now..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-28748288620159026252015-05-22T16:13:15.679-07:002015-05-22T16:13:15.679-07:00Brilliant -- I loved that: both the form and your ...Brilliant -- I loved that: both the form and your choices. Well doneSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-12128281024112212842015-05-22T11:33:14.311-07:002015-05-22T11:33:14.311-07:00Fantastic piece. I can't tell you how many tim...Fantastic piece. I can't tell you how many times I have said this: <br />"Sugar is my kryptonite." <br /><br />That first stanza, in particular, packs a punch.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-4031846060012242812015-05-22T06:54:44.050-07:002015-05-22T06:54:44.050-07:00Really well done!Really well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-81854943988732071812015-05-22T06:31:19.981-07:002015-05-22T06:31:19.981-07:00Whimsical and thought-provoking.Whimsical and thought-provoking.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-79563959494300224782015-05-22T02:48:45.446-07:002015-05-22T02:48:45.446-07:00each line with much emotion..very powerful write.....each line with much emotion..very powerful write...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-80187242424055703202015-05-22T02:10:01.287-07:002015-05-22T02:10:01.287-07:00So many lines I like here! Anger is my pilot light...So many lines I like here! Anger is my pilot light. Scars are my receipts. (as for gluttony and downfall, well, well, you must have seen right into my mind there...)Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-83074102382269709182015-05-22T01:08:23.843-07:002015-05-22T01:08:23.843-07:00Very vivid, Yes.Very vivid, Yes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-57833290924031659912015-05-21T18:35:54.066-07:002015-05-21T18:35:54.066-07:00"Writing is my revenge" ... sounds omin..."Writing is my revenge" ... sounds ominous. I think many of those lines resonate! Thotpurgehttp://thotpurge.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-27864674205516115912015-05-21T17:13:19.715-07:002015-05-21T17:13:19.715-07:00Excellent contrasts moving down to the exploding l...Excellent contrasts moving down to the exploding last line. Hayes Spencer is KanzensakuraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-39444148666217141112015-05-21T16:56:12.243-07:002015-05-21T16:56:12.243-07:00Fine list poem. I like how you chose to end it.Fine list poem. I like how you chose to end it.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-91833581439207807652015-05-21T16:47:24.385-07:002015-05-21T16:47:24.385-07:00This really creates a vivid picture, Mosk!This really creates a vivid picture, Mosk!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-29462118682132091482015-05-21T14:22:33.653-07:002015-05-21T14:22:33.653-07:00Dude. This is totally RAD. "Music is my fruit...Dude. This is totally RAD. "Music is my fruit" is my favorite line because I adore both in equal measure. Hee hee. Catch my pun? ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-91464030055168646302015-05-21T14:07:36.259-07:002015-05-21T14:07:36.259-07:00Excellent and very clever. We are strange things ...Excellent and very clever. We are strange things aren't we?<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-8749965508179801172015-05-21T13:36:45.590-07:002015-05-21T13:36:45.590-07:00Really great contrast you paint here.. and that la...Really great contrast you paint here.. and that last line is a killer one... The way you pair the words are each a little surprise, yet crystal clear.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com