tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post8417621364844738367..comments2024-01-09T05:39:44.523-08:00Comments on I Hate Poetry: The Buddah Moskowitz Archive: Rock Bottom (Prompt: Dead End)Buddah Moskowitzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-25255721239923345192012-02-09T14:07:34.828-08:002012-02-09T14:07:34.828-08:00Love a poem that tells a story but leaves much to ...Love a poem that tells a story but leaves much to the imagination, like this one.Zouxzouxhttp://zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-8314821539097293942012-02-09T07:03:25.355-08:002012-02-09T07:03:25.355-08:00I also like the twist that the word "probably...I also like the twist that the word "probably" gives at the end, a sense that the man in the poem is quite talented at getting himself into trouble. Very thought-provoking, Mosk!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-28469830977499956252012-02-08T22:26:32.298-08:002012-02-08T22:26:32.298-08:00Pain is different on everyone's scale, right? ...Pain is different on everyone's scale, right? Yeah, this is rock bottom... and it's a sad story. The insert of that single word, "probably," ensures that the worst may still be yet to come. OY! Ameleh<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2012/02/07/emotional-dyslexic/Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00546103899091072370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-71308528616354334282012-02-08T11:49:39.181-08:002012-02-08T11:49:39.181-08:00Unfortunately, some don't think of it as rock ...Unfortunately, some don't think of it as rock bottom.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-55088862692720608502012-02-08T10:56:11.925-08:002012-02-08T10:56:11.925-08:00Yup, I'd agree! Sounds like rock bottom to me...Yup, I'd agree! Sounds like rock bottom to me. However, sometimes when one thinks it can't get worse.......it does.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-57336355790061184772012-02-08T09:11:48.326-08:002012-02-08T09:11:48.326-08:00I like "probably" at the end.I like "probably" at the end.Kathy Bischopinghttp://www.drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2012/02/meet-maples.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-46315632603436895882012-02-08T08:34:04.803-08:002012-02-08T08:34:04.803-08:00Sometimes the best poetry is just the blunt, hones...Sometimes the best poetry is just the blunt, honest story.<br /><br />But then, sometimes the rock isn't really the bottom.Goldberryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15108356183137108507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12624992.post-33530002951775108502012-02-08T08:29:59.032-08:002012-02-08T08:29:59.032-08:00Um...yeah, I would think. Love this kind of poem. ...Um...yeah, I would think. Love this kind of poem. Makes you think and wonder, is this funny or sad or just glad because I'm not that person?Caren E. Salashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16886501693332596087noreply@blogger.com