Wednesday, October 14, 2015

The Rivulets of Desire

These wet
and slippery
tongues caress one
another,
as lovers share
the same
hot breath.

A niggling,
ticklish
drop of sweat,
waterslides
down the small
of her back,

and joins the droplets,
the rivulets of desire,

the slick anatomy
finding and
reuniting with
one another,
resulting in
the grandest,
and most sumptuous
mystery of all:

how can so much
moisture
cause so much fire?

31 comments:

  1. Oh, good question. You have expressed this facet of fire very well. Nice to see you here, Buddah!

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    1. Ah, the mystery of life and love! Thanks!

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  2. How indeed! Your poem is alive!

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  3. Wow. Good stuff #blushes

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    1. Yay! #blushes! #thatmeansyourbloodisflowing

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  4. hahah - a mystery in itself - whew

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  5. This is a fiery HOT one, Mosk. Smiles.

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    1. As fires tend to be - thanks!

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  6. Oh gosh!! This is one passionate write!

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    1. Glad that came through, thanks.

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  7. Oh, deliciously sensual and HOT.

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    1. Thanks, anything delicious is good.

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  8. Yum!! This is a delicious poem, Buddah! I enjoyed every drop and rivulet...beautifully expressed. :)

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    1. I'm glad you enjoyed every drop. :) Thanks, Mosk

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  9. Ha ha .. good question :)

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  10. Makes me think of raincoats;)

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    1. Raincoats? That's kinky! Thanks.

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  11. aw...the words do ignite Fire...beautifully Hot..(chuckle)..

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    1. That's what *she* said. Thanks, Mosk

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  12. It is a wonderful thing when two souls who truly resonate with one another meet and create such a fine paradox!

    Thank you for visiting me at poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com

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  13. You write about one of the best aspects of fire - the one created by passion. Nice.

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    1. Thanks for your kind comment.

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  14. Heavens. I need a cold shower, now. ;) Or a date night with my hot hubby.

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  15. How about a cold shower with your hot hubby? Thanks for the compliment.

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  16. Ah, indeed! Steamy and fiery... Well-penned!

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