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Monday, May 08, 2017

Her Moaning Assent

The memory of
her moaning assent
echoes forever.

The echo bounces
off one block
of memories,
onto another,
ad infinitum.

However,
they do not decay
as naturally occurring
sounds do.

No,
they loop
at full-volume,

a supernatural siren
ever distracting me
into lustful dizziness.

[Written for De Jackson's quadrille prompt.]

12 comments:

  1. **fans self**
    Wow, Mosk. ;)

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  2. This is incredibly potent! Especially like; "The echo bounces off one block of memories, onto another, ad infinitum."

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  3. 'Lustful dizziness' Yuh huh! Marvelous and steamy :)

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  4. Greatly expressed, Buddha! Wonderful imagery!

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  5. Sensual echoes, indeed. Well expressed.

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  6. Randy & romantic--making some of we old guys have to harken back to the days of youth & yore when we, too, could harbor such a memory, perception, & steamy dreamy past & present.

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  7. Memories that bounce back seem to gain energy to keep bouncing.

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  8. 'a supernatural siren' evokes a robust echo. I enjoyed this as well as your observation that unlike sound this vivid memory does not decay. good one :)

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  9. Oh yes, some of those lust-filled times hardly fade from memory at all!

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  10. Yes there are sounds that never silence..

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