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Sunday, August 13, 2017

Sublime

Outside in the dark,
warm summer night breeze
streaming Don Rickles
on YouTube,

high as a kite
from year-old
bubbled
Lemon drop;

we're both laughing,
God
and me.

12 comments:

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  2. I freaking love this poem. Especially the "breeze"/"streaming" rhyme ... and then the year-old bubbled lemon drop sounds yummy.

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    1. Thanks, it was written on the swing bench, last night at the apogee of my high. Too forever since I was not too clear.

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  3. Ha ha, like this.

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  4. I like this scene. Funny.

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  5. I like the being high off the lemon drop and laughing!

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  6. I love the sound of God's laughter. It's contagious,

    Elizabeth

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  7. High! Good attitude!

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  8. Love the warmth and humor in this poem.

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