When the police ask
if you have any
unused vacation time
so you can go into hiding
until they can
find and dissuade
the man who is
trying to kill you
because he (erroneously) thinks
you raped his wife
and you pack
as many of your possessions
that’ll fit in the back of your Honda
and you take
one last
good look around
at the room
and think
“what if I never see this
again?”
then
you’ve probably hit
rock bottom.
if you have any
unused vacation time
so you can go into hiding
until they can
find and dissuade
the man who is
trying to kill you
because he (erroneously) thinks
you raped his wife
and you pack
as many of your possessions
that’ll fit in the back of your Honda
and you take
one last
good look around
at the room
and think
“what if I never see this
again?”
then
you’ve probably hit
rock bottom.
Um...yeah, I would think. Love this kind of poem. Makes you think and wonder, is this funny or sad or just glad because I'm not that person?
ReplyDeleteSometimes the best poetry is just the blunt, honest story.
ReplyDeleteBut then, sometimes the rock isn't really the bottom.
I like "probably" at the end.
ReplyDeleteYup, I'd agree! Sounds like rock bottom to me. However, sometimes when one thinks it can't get worse.......it does.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, some don't think of it as rock bottom.
ReplyDeletePain is different on everyone's scale, right? Yeah, this is rock bottom... and it's a sad story. The insert of that single word, "probably," ensures that the worst may still be yet to come. OY! Ameleh
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I also like the twist that the word "probably" gives at the end, a sense that the man in the poem is quite talented at getting himself into trouble. Very thought-provoking, Mosk!
ReplyDeleteLove a poem that tells a story but leaves much to the imagination, like this one.
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