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Thursday, January 10, 2013
God Isn't
God isn't
the steady hang of the clouds
inching across the sky
or the moment changing
from fearful to forgiven
or pink smiling lips
stealing a bit of chocolate
or the concentric rings
of a pebble splash in a pond
or the instinct that
feeds and comforts the weak
or the sacrifice of
a convicted criminal on a cross
or the mysterious melody
of the birds a capella at dawn
or a warm and soft pillow
to rest your head upon
or the sweet fragrance
of a perfectly cultivated rose.
God isn't
any one of these things,
but all these things,
et cetera,
ad infinitum,
amen.
[Written for http://dversepoets.com/2013/01/10/the-medium-is-the-message-dverse-meeting-the-bar/ and God.]
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ha true that...it is hard to find something god truly isnt...or isnt in....sHe is in the beauty and the muck...all above and below....smiles.
ReplyDeleteLove your personal pronoun for God. Thanks for the kind words.
DeleteMosk, I love this and it is, indeed, very Mary Oliver like. This is a message that she puts forth so often in her work. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThanks, I don't know many poets, but I do like Mary Oliver's poems.
DeleteExquisite use of images - and a powerful punch at the end; just what the prompt asked for.
ReplyDeleteExquisite? :) That's a great compliment!
DeleteHe is fullness of all things He created... nice
ReplyDeleteThanks so much - Mosk
DeleteI like the seeming contradiction, yet He is in all ~
ReplyDeleteThanks - they only seem like contradictions. Glad you understand.
DeleteAMEN!
ReplyDeleteThanks and Amen!
Deleteor the mysterious melody
ReplyDeleteof the birds a capella at dawn
Yes indeed. Fine writing, I enjoyed it very much!
Thanks! Love to listen to the birds.
DeleteBeautifully and thoughtfully expressed. God IS!
ReplyDeleteGod *is* indeed! Thanks!
DeleteYou nailed it, Buddah. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words.
DeleteLoved this.... so true...
ReplyDeleteThanks, but really can't take too much credit for it. :)
DeleteTrue words eloquently stated.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. :)
Delete...i am with thee with all of these...like Victoria, i find yours to possess a Mary O's characteristic in poetry...excellent write & a great experience...thanks...smiles...
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words.
Delete...I enjoyed this poem very much ;)
ReplyDelete...and I enjoyed your enjoyment. :) Thanks
DeleteLoved this muchly! Thanks, poet friend! God bless you more and more. - deb
ReplyDeleteThanka-thanka.
DeleteYes!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Yes is one of my favorite words.
DeleteConcentric rings... I've missed your words. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you - good to see you!
Deletea bell rings
ReplyDeleteand I find God
in the silence
in the moment it
stops
Beautiful!
DeleteGot teary-eyed, loved this and it's so true.
ReplyDeleteLoved this, a perfect read for a Sunday.
ReplyDeleteThanks - loved both comments!
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