I bring the delicacy
to my lips
and breathe in its
presence,
the hint of steam
and the scent
and the scent
immediately swimming
in my bloodstream,
finding my heart
and rocketing
its adrenaline magic
throughout
my body.
I am brought out
of the gray silence
into a fresh new dimension,
a secret garden,
and I am unashamed
at my gluttony,
but that naked vulnerability
I share with only you,
liberates me
and I unravel
like a morning glory,
petals unfolding
to catch every bit
of life from above.
I cannot,
nay, will not
stop this
passionate
communion.
You are here
bringing me life
and my response
is ravenous
and messy
and unrestrained;
I never feel more alive.
Now, bring that canister
of aerosol frosting over here
and let’s tear the roof
off this sucker.
(Written for the http://dversepoets.com/ Open Link Night, January 17, 2012)
awesome...love your close...haha...yes frosting might just blow the roof off this joint...lol...hot verse...
ReplyDeleteHOT...and what a great ending with the aerosol canister, you might not even need one with that hot verse..smiles
ReplyDeleteThey make aerosol frosting??? :)
ReplyDeletethanks, poet friend, for keeping us passionate!
wrapped in mystery until the explosive end...wonderful!
ReplyDeleteHa ha! My mind was going in a different direction until I arrived at the end! Delicious!
ReplyDeleteLove every single image here...
ReplyDeletegreat, closing and all!
fantastic, another fun ride, sir. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI think we are on the same page...ha..ha...the ending had me laughing ~
ReplyDeleteFunny, love the twist ending. I confess to being a little frightened that there is such a thing as aerosol frosting!
ReplyDeleteHilARious!!!! I love it!
ReplyDelete...there's always something we want
ReplyDeletecute, smiles
ReplyDeleteHa ha...awesome!
ReplyDeleteLOL go ahead and tear the roof off!
ReplyDeleteGlorious imagery
ReplyDeleteYeah for your passionate communion and aerosol frosting!! This fantastic!!
ReplyDeleteThere are a couple of ways to interpret this, and either one could be complemented by aerosol frosting...though I prefer non-aerosol for the sake of the environment.
ReplyDeleteFantastic. I loved the contrast between the opening and closing... you never fail to make me smile.
ReplyDeleteAlways a treat to read your words.
ReplyDeleteHow fun and surprising. I'm reading this on an entirely different level and, bam! Yum! Love it.
ReplyDeleteAnother amusing read! You used great imagery, I loved it :)
ReplyDeleteFrosting makes everything sweeter! YUM!
ReplyDeleteI love the combination of romantic and raucous sensibilities--Yay!
ReplyDeleteoh wow, great not seeing the frosting until I was at the end... nice twist & great write
ReplyDeleteLets tear the roof of this sucker... :-) I enjoyed reading this one...
ReplyDeleteShashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2012/01/whispers-haiku-on-how-i-write-poetry.html
At twitter @VerseEveryDay
Really enjoyed this :) Especially,
ReplyDelete"but that naked vulnerability
I share with only you,
liberates me
and I unravel
like a morning glory,
petals unfolding
to catch every bit
of life from above."
Love the twist at the end, Buddah. I just read your interview at PU. It is very nice to meet you.
ReplyDeletePamela
Make mine aerosol whipped cream. :) Very clever, love the ending.
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