Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Room Service (Prompt: Dessert)

New love,
and in
the afterglow,

she let me
savor

the hot fudge sundae
off her
bare
bottom,

and I have been
hers
ever since.

[Note: I purposely wrote this using 25 words or less. Is that a recognized form?  If not, I'd like to claim it. :) ]

8 comments:

  1. What will you name your new form? Maybe I should let my hubby eat a hot fudge sundae off my bottom--the calories go right to my ass anyway!

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  2. I want to call the form the Soupy Sales (based on his letter writing ethic: in 25 words or less). Yes, for goodness sake, let hubby have a real treat!

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  3. Gives a sweet connotation to "kiss my ass"! :-P

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    1. Exactly. "Kiss my ass" is only an insult when given by the wrong person!

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  4. Lolamouse stole my line!

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    1. Then my advice is the same: give PapaZen a sundae kind of love.

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  5. What a sweet poem! :-)

    Stop by my blog if you get a chance to pick up an award (no pressure)

    Thanks, Mosk!

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  6. And of course I forgot to post the link.. Here it is:
    http://www.thehappyamateur.com/2012/05/liebster-blog-nominations.html

    :-)

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