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Wednesday, June 20, 2012

The Shortest Distance (Prompt: Straight)

The
shortest
distance
between
two
points
is
a
straight
line,
unless
the
points
are
on
our
lips,
in
which
case,
stop
thinking
and
kiss
me.

(Poetic Form: Soupy Sales, 25 Words or Less)

14 comments:

  1. so very sweet...reminds me of my favorite phrase, "shut up and kiss me" ;)

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    1. That song did go through my head as I thought of this. Thanks.

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  2. Ha! Now this is romantic. The kind of things I think are romantic anyway.

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  3. Could I... I would...!!!
    great piece.

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  4. I would, but I'm not...straight! :-P

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  5. ha i am all for kissing....kinda shut and kiss me going on here....i will just close the door on my way out...smiles....

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  6. dang reading the comments now i can see my thought was not original....that stinks...smiles...

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    1. Regardless, you're a true original, my friend!

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  7. This is great! I did this prompt too and used the "the distance between two lines" too... I guess middle school math stuck with everyone. Regardless, great poem and the ending is awesome.

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