so very sweet...reminds me of my favorite phrase, "shut up and kiss me" ;)
That song did go through my head as I thought of this. Thanks.
Ha! Now this is romantic. The kind of things I think are romantic anyway.
Could I... I would...!!! great piece.
I would, but I'm not...straight! :-P
Not there's a loophole!
ha i am all for kissing....kinda shut and kiss me going on here....i will just close the door on my way out...smiles....
dang reading the comments now i can see my thought was not original....that stinks...smiles...
Regardless, you're a true original, my friend!
This is great! I did this prompt too and used the "the distance between two lines" too... I guess middle school math stuck with everyone. Regardless, great poem and the ending is awesome.