the grandeur, the mystery
the infinite grace of God,
I get few comments.
Writing about
my misadventures
of trying to quell
my miscreant penis,
these poems are very popular,
which goes to prove
the writer’s first rule:
write about
what
you
know.
[Presented for D'verse Poets Quadrille ]
Oh, my friend. Stunning ending. Stunning.
ReplyDeleteThough I think that, like me, you have come to know both.
Oh, wicked! Although I'm sure there's an ounce of truth in there... and a dash of mockery too.
ReplyDeleteLove this!! So emotive and raw ❤
ReplyDeleteI read of a professor who, if his students were drifting, would just toss in the word sex and that would get their attention. It works. Funny that.
ReplyDeleteAllthatis provided all his mammals with a penis, & plants with a stamen, so perhaps pro/recreation is a divine right, even for poets & miscreants; just saying.
ReplyDeleteClever and true...nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI had no idea you had a miscreant penis. I came here for the grandeur and the mystery. ;-D
ReplyDeleteThanks for your optimism.
DeleteBahahaha! Er, sorry. Sort of.
ReplyDeleteI have to chuckle... and I guess there is a reason why I rarely write about my appendix
ReplyDeleteha..good point & true :)
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteTo this, I completely agree. :)
ReplyDeleteIt also goes to prove that were not as mature as we'd sometimes like to believe :-)
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem. I too came for the sacred and not the profane. Excellent quadrille except you did not use the prompt word -- "open".
ReplyDeleteHa...this is great!
ReplyDeleteLike your word choices..."miscreant" and "quell" and the obvious contrasts. Very effective.
ReplyDeletePen iS
ReplyDeletemiGhtier
than the SWord
And oPen.. Dance.. eveN
more powerful than Word..
tRust me.. Women Love
Dance
more
than
one's
pen
iS
caPable
to
floW..
or even
poEtry StiLL to coMe..
aT lEast that's whaT all the
photos say on the Longest Long
form poem ever.. sMiLes beat liKes..
hands
uP noW..
wiTh Dance
Peace too..;)
Haha. Love this.
ReplyDeleteGotta love this one. :)
ReplyDeleteI guess so! :)
ReplyDeletelaughing right out loud ~
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