"These aren't poems. They're more like long-form fortune cookies."
Aww. You poor baby. :(I'll tell you what, I got the best exercise this weekend picking up trash on the side of the road. I'm starting to think useful exercise makes more sense. Cleaning and whatnot."Close to the grave" makes me think of my uncle, who has visited his wife every day since she died. He's "close" to her grave --- emotionally attached.This is why I like micro poems so much. They give you a chance to analyze each word.