I started out
wanting to be
a song and dance man,
an entertainer.
I haven't
the hubris
to assume
you'll follow me
down the
rabbit hole
of vague,
inscrutable
imagery and
poetic conceit,
so I just try
to amuse
with the
workman's toolkit of
humor and pathos,
sex and violence.
I need
an audience
for confirmation,
so I'll sing,
dance,
and in desperation,
burlesque my way
into a motley strip tease,
revealing my
naked soul,
every hairy orifice
and unflattering bulge
on freakish display,
hoping you won't
turn away
and find someone else.
I don't write about
the horsetails in Asia,
or a church bell's lonesome tail,
or anything noble
like that;
its most just about
me.
Seemingly, in humility
I don't describe myself
a poet,
but rather a documentarian
and my only subject
is me,
which,
upon reflection,
is hubris
in its purest form.
I LOVE this!!!!!! Especially enjoyed the hairy orifices....especially love the horsetails in Asia stanza........
ReplyDeleteThank you - I was just being honest about who I am.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful & intense...! Appreciate honest poetry.. as it reflects the character of the esteemed Poet :D
ReplyDeletexoxo
Thanks, Sanaa! This is honestly who I am.
Deletenice and very much in keepiny with your style lately Mosk
ReplyDeletemuch love
Thanks Gillena! I didn't realize my style was so noticeable.
DeleteThis is so brutally honest.. And yes there are many levels of hubris,
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bjorn. I am guilty as charged.
DeleteThe conclusions drawn were quite funny and honest. I am amused and entertained, so point goes to hubris.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. Like I said I value being entertaining, so your words touched me.
DeleteI find when I point the finger at myself I keep others from having to do it. :) Always love your viewpoint.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susie! You can't accuse of something I've already admitted!
Deletepick a flower, any flower. a horsetail in Asia? i'm a horsetail in Irwindale. don't look it up. there's no such place. just trying to rhyme and wax poetic, the stuff you hate.
ReplyDeleteAh, but that's where you're wrong. Irwindale is a city in LA county, see http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Irwindale,_California . Besides, you could do much verse than trying to rhyme and wax poetic.
DeleteHonest and true-is so you! I enjoyed your poem~
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, I appreciate your kindness.
DeleteOh, I love this, and chuckled aloud at your ending. A neat way of addressing the prompt without allowing it to dictate to you!
ReplyDeleteYour chuckle is my highest praise.Thanks!
DeleteI love that ending! I was just reflecting today about all the stuff I never write about. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks, and I think you should open that can and start writing.
DeleteNarcissus blooming. There is nothing wrong with being our own subject. I'm mine most of the time; the rest of the time, my subjects are people or things that might affect me... hm, I guess it's all about me, too
ReplyDeleteLove this.
Thanks so much. Perhaps the personal is also the universal.
DeleteMosk - you're my favorite writer because of your honesty. You've influenced my writing in that way. And I'm the better for it. And for knowing you. Big hugs & kisses back to you, my friend. xo Paula
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paula. I always enjoy your writing - it does not compel me to contort my brain into origami for me to decipher it. Also, you approach your art with humility and I think that's a good perspective :) Mosk
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DeleteYou know, the kind of poets I like to read most are the kind that write about themselves....and you are one of those. Don't stop doing it, please.
ReplyDeleteThank you... and your wish is my command!
Deletea fine lens you've carved here; fearless, humble, and well crafted ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for your praise! Write on, my friend!
DeleteLove it. Have all the hubris you want!
ReplyDeleteThanks, and yes, I'll have some more hubris! It's lo-calorie, right?
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