Yes, I have felt this so many times. Beautiful
ah yes, we must be humble before nature's bountymuch love...
Very nicely captured juxtaposition between the mighty element and the single man.
Oh, yes...so true...you've captured perfectly what I've thought so many times. Thank you for writing today!
I feel the same way about the ocean.
I simply love this. :)
meekly - Nice contrast to the two beginning lines - really like how it goes form big to small - but brave too. Nice!
How small we are to the vastness of the sea.
I can just see you! (That would be me, too.)
there's a gentleness in this
the ocean can be quite intimidating...still there is something to said for being a part of such a magnificent beauty even if for but a moment.
Mighty vs Meek--though it seems the ocean wants your company.I like that. I like standing at the edge and holding its hand.
That's the feeling - you've nailed it.
I love the huge and small feeling you have captured~
For someone who hates poetry, you did an amazing job. Very powerful punch in a few words.thanks for stopping by to visit.Have a great weekend.
oh, so well done ~