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Friday, April 17, 2015

Ocean Haiku

Infinite ocean,
terrifying but soothing;
meekly, I wade in.

19 comments:

  1. Yes, I have felt this so many times. Beautiful

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  2. ah yes, we must be humble before nature's bounty

    much love...

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  3. Very nicely captured juxtaposition between the mighty element and the single man.

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  4. Oh, yes...so true...you've captured perfectly what I've thought so many times. Thank you for writing today!

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  5. I feel the same way about the ocean.

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  6. I simply love this. :)

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  7. meekly - Nice contrast to the two beginning lines - really like how it goes form big to small - but brave too. Nice!

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  8. How small we are to the vastness of the sea.

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  9. I can just see you! (That would be me, too.)

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  10. there's a gentleness in this

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  11. the ocean can be quite intimidating...still there is something to said for being a part of such a magnificent beauty even if for but a moment.

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  12. Mighty vs Meek--though it seems the ocean wants your company.I like that. I like standing at the edge and holding its hand.

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  13. That's the feeling - you've nailed it.

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  14. I love the huge and small feeling you have captured~

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  15. For someone who hates poetry, you did an amazing job. Very powerful punch in a few words.

    thanks for stopping by to visit.

    Have a great weekend.

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