"These aren't poems. They're more like speeches from a movie that will never be made."
Communication isn't always easy!
conversation is not an easy thing... it happens quite easy that we misunderstand each other... and minimal nuances can make a big difference...
Ouch! You write it so we can definitely feel the awkwardness between them!
hahaha cross gender communication always seems a bit hard...i think we as guys are rather at a disadvantage...ha...like the little symbols appearing over their heads like cartoons...smiles.
oh...this is so visual...
All a question of tense!
Semantic noise; it'll gitcha every time!
oh.. yes those ellipses out of Venus is not always easy to keep track of..
I've had these conversations, felt the invisible question marks above my head. Excellent clever write.Anna :o]
I feel like I'm watching this waiting for some tea and cookies. It demonstrates how even speaking the same language doesn't guarantee understanding.
Ha! Love it!