I awaken
in darkness
alone in my bed
(problem #1),
and I hear someone,
something,
slamming against
the front door
(problem #2).
The alarm wails
(problem #3)
and before
I can panic,
the familiar
beep-beep-beep-beep
of the code
is entered
which quells
the alarm
(problem #4).
I call out
"who is it?"
and there is
no response
(problem #5)
save for the sound
of breathing
and the opening
and closing
of kitchen drawers
(problem #6).
I attempt
"Who's there?"
but my voice
suddenly strained,
is whisper quiet,
(problem #7),
and I hear
the familiar squeak
of the knife drawer
(problem #8).
I try to kick off
the blankets,
but I'm inexplicably,
inextricably,
tucked in
(problem #9),
as heavy footsteps
plod up the stairs
to my room
(problem #10).
In the moonlight
I see the glint
of the blade
in the hand
of the approaching intruder
(problem #11),
as my body,
frozen in fear,
eyes closed hard,
awaits the plunge
(problem #12).
Exactly that feeling of being tethered... like someone bound to be garroted is what I feel as a nightmare... also how logical and luscious the dreams appear... those problem statements can only lead to two conclusions... dead or a nightmare.
ReplyDeleteThanks, yes, most of my nightmares find me in horrible situations and I cannot extricate myself. How claustrophobic!
DeleteDon't worry, I don't think your problems will last much longer! Yikes. This reminds me of my one experience with sleep paralysis, when i could hear everything around me--in a noisy dorm--but was unable to move or speak or snap out of the unpleasant dream I was having.
ReplyDeletela la Mosky! Dun worry, I'll save you!
Ha! One of the strangest things is that after I awaken, and I know I'm safe and sound, I am almost disappointed that I didn't die, only because I want to know what that's like before it actually happens. Quick, save me! La la Mosk
DeleteI am here and I can leave a comment! I have had nights like this without sleep, but thankfully no knives, grin.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and commenting Unknown reader! Sleepless nights are torture, but I'd rather have them over nightmares. I wrote something long along called "Do Not Let Me Sleep Until I Awake" about how if I sleep too long, I remember my nightmares - but if the alarm clock wakes me up, I don't remember! Problem solved! Tra la la!
DeleteOh my...I would have been dead before problem #12. When I hear a noise, I search for it immediately...thus I would have met the knife sooner.
ReplyDeleteI agree, but problem #9 did me in! Thanks, Mosk
DeleteThe bald understatement and the clinical listing of problems by numbers makes this piece all the more scary! A wonderful write.
ReplyDeleteThanks, as I re-read it, it's almost like a checklist for a cliched horror film!
DeleteYikes! You built the suspense so well!
ReplyDeleteThanks! It was creepy writing it.
DeleteYikes--those are some pretty serious problems! Take care! Enjoyed the read! k.
ReplyDeleteThanks, and nighty-night!
Deletedouble yikes!! good one Buddah
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for dropping in to read mine
much love...
Much love back, Mosk
DeleteThis is such a perfect unfolding of that sort of nightmare--the total fear, the paralysis, the slo-mo quality of everything ...great suspenseful writing, Mosk.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I spooked myself writing it.
DeleteLove that this happens in snapshots. It's like we leave the nightmare at the same rate the speaker does. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks, you talented and perceptive person!
DeleteTwelve problems for each strike of the clock. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteMade me hold my breath a little. Yikes. Awesome, and scary.
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