This is an excellent poem, Mosk. I especially like the first five lines, and consider it an extreme honor to provide any comfort I can ... definitely NEVER as your foe.
It really hits all of us emotionally. It seems life does provide us with "rehearsals" for divers events, funerals & hospitals are top of the list. My mother passed when she was 39, over 50 years ago, but I watch so many others walking those worrisome corridors.
I hope for the best Mosk~ Prayers for a good recovery~
ReplyDeleteI'm so sorry about your mommy. :(
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent poem, Mosk. I especially like the first five lines, and consider it an extreme honor to provide any comfort I can ... definitely NEVER as your foe.
Powerful words. Sending positive thoughts your way...
ReplyDeleteOh, Mosk, this gave me a lump in my throat.
ReplyDeleteWishing her a quick recovery..your poem is so poignant.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes for her recovery.
ReplyDeleteThis was so touching, a place where I can feel to be uncomforted by the comforting,
ReplyDeleteWishing your mum a speedy recovery - I know that numb feeling.
ReplyDeleteSorry to hear of your mom's struggles.
ReplyDeleteSending love and prayers, Mosk
ReplyDeleteA touching piece of work here, Mosk! Thoughts and well wishes for your mother's struggles!
ReplyDeleteThat numbness, when everyone is trying to be positive, and all it does it drive you deeper into the numbness. Stark and very real,
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Best wishes. In your poem you express a moment that I can feel and recognize.
ReplyDeleteIt really hits all of us emotionally. It seems life does provide us with "rehearsals" for divers events, funerals & hospitals are top of the list. My mother passed when she was 39, over 50 years ago, but I watch so many others walking those worrisome corridors.
ReplyDeleteThat numb feeling is common in these situations. I know it well. I hope things take a positive turn.
ReplyDeletegood luck, Mosk ~
ReplyDeleteMakes me think of when I was in the hospital and walking the halls after my head injury. Well done, poignant.
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