"These aren't poems. They're more like speeches from a movie that will never be made."
Tuesday, November 27, 2012
Death Is No Villain (Nov 27 Prompt: Heroes & Villains)
Death is no villain.
He has always
played straight with me,
offering no illusions.
and when he does
he won’t be deterred.
He reminds me
there is no time
and that the bird outside
is not just singing,
sounding the alarm
to live NOW!
and the joy in my chest
when the music falls
is death reminding me
to dance NOW!
and not think
about the end of the
He never told me
he wasn’t coming,
and he keeps his word
by taking my parents,
and other heroes,
one at a time,
in great, dispassionate
every single day.
Death is my hero
because I can trust him
to have the integrity
and keep his word,
to follow through
on his promise.
Until he comes for me,
skipping with impunity,
until that inevitable knock
on my door.
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oh heck yes...dance now...live now...we never know when the song comes to an end...ReplyDelete
Now is the only time! Thanks!ReplyDelete
death is my hero because i can trust him...what a mind expanding line that is...but true as well...we can...and def now is all we got...ReplyDelete
Thanks and I'm glad you're in my now. :)Delete
Oh heck yes, so many of us never even live to enjoy drawing our pensions let alone anything else. Now is all we do have.ReplyDelete
Powerful truth in every line.
Zactly - thanks!Delete
I agree now more than ever to enjoy each day... and knowing what I know about God gives me hope.ReplyDelete
I agree with your attitude, thanks for the comment.Delete
Thanks, but even then when you play against Death you always lose. :)Delete
You have expressed what I think as well, Mosk. Death is a straight shooter, minces no words. His coming does give us reason to dance now, laugh now, live now. His voice is still on the horizon, but someday he will look us in the eye, and it will be too late then to wish to dance!ReplyDelete
Thanks, dance on!Delete
I love this! Have you ever read The Book Thief? Your portrayal of death is much like the one in that book, it is one of my favorite novels. And yes, dance!ReplyDelete
The Book Thief, eh? Reminds me of an ex-gf I used to know... thanks.Delete
The only certainty. The only truth I do not question. The only guarantee. I do not fear death...only the fear of not going first. Seeing my loved ones, rather...not seeing them anymore...is the hardest hurt to live with. So yes...he is hero...but I do wonder if he enjoys playing tricks on the living. Awesome write!ReplyDelete
Thank you, thank you! Yes, I'm getting to that age when parents and parents of my friends are starting to die off. Ah, life... and death!Delete
I agree, Buddah, dance and sing now while we can, cause when we're dead I don't believe we'll doing too much of that. Nicely written poem. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem today, it is much appreciated.ReplyDelete
Thanks so much - and what was your blog address again? I lost it!Delete
Thanks! I don't hear that often.Delete
Yes! Living in the now is all we have. I love that stanza that starts "Death is my hero because I can trust him...." Oh, yeah! Great, Mosk!ReplyDelete
Thank you - yes, it's always a struggle live in the now.Delete
"...in great, dispassionate handfuls..." what a line. and i love the message of this piece. strong write, Mosk. :)ReplyDelete
Thanks, Dr Joanna. Yes, Death's a playa, all right.Delete
an interesting relationship. I never really saw how insightful death can be about life. a really fascinating write.ReplyDelete
Thanks for your kind words - MoskDelete